Critique #2

Ammar

Photo #1- In this photo the red stands out to me in the target (the word and the symbol). I would enjoy the photo a little more if the sky wasn't in the picture.

Photo #2- I feel that he needed to be down a little more, so that he could almost be eye level and that there could be a shallow depth of field. I feel that he was in a comfortable position while taking this picture.

Photo #3- I like this photo because the yellow pops out at you because there are no other colors in the photo. I feel that it is also balances because of the white sign that you can barely read behind it.

Photo #4- The car bothers me in this photo, I feel that it distracts me from the object that I am suppose to be focused on. Otherwise, good exposure and color.

Photo #5- This photo being sideways throws me off but I like it. Its different.

Photo #6- I like how the pole jumps out at you not only because it is a different color but it is also close up. I also like how everything else looks darker in a way

Photo #7- This is a very busy photo. The yellow does pop out but if it was focus on one where the rest were blurred I would Like it better

Photo #8- I love the colors in this photo. Although I wish the background was out of focus a little more. The glare that is in the photo is also a little distracting in a way

Photo #9- I do not like how this photo is just cut off and in the middle of the photo there is a lines and I cannot tell if it is part of the picture or if it is a glare. I would like if I could see the whole picture it just makes me wonder.

Photo #10- This car pops. I like how there are two of the same cars although the color of the car is what makes one stand out more than the other.

Assignment #2 Color

F 13

1/640

F 16

1/500

F8

1/50

F8

1/50

F11

1/400

F16

1/400

F 6.3

1/80

F11

1/640

F8

1/200

F6.3

1/200

Writing Assignment #1

When I look at this photo I think of the notes as the ups and downs in your life. And in the middle of the photo is your heart. Music is all around. There is a song for any and everything that you are going through at that point and time in your life. Music can make you feel sad, happy, loving, make you think, put you to sleep, or make you feel any emotion that you could possibly think of.  There is a song out there for everyone, a song that talks to someone and helps them through their days at times. I listen to music every chance that I get. I listen when I am cleaning, to make it fun. I listen to music when I'm driving, to make the time pass. I listen to music when I study, to help me concentrate. Music can go with you anywhere you are. Let the music fill your heart, and you can get through any obstacle that comes your way.



Assignment #1

F25 1/200

converging lines, shape, curvilinear lines 

F 13 1/200

Rule of third

F 3.5 1/1000

curvilinear lines, converging lines, shape, alternative point of view, horizontal and vertical format closed frame

F 8 1/160

movement, converging lines, curvilinear lines, rule of thirds 

F 10 1/160

movement, vertical format

F16 1/200

symmetrical balance, converging lines, curvilinear lines 

F 11 1/160

curvilinear lines, shape 

F10 1/160

movement, converging lines, curvilinear lines, rule of thirds 

F 5.6 1/30 

frame within a frame, alternate point of view, atmospheric perspective, closed frame 

F 8 1/250

movement, converging lines, atmospheric perspective